endlessnumber's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nav - Deathwish [Full Ver.]]

Kick's not loud enough :(

good:
- really cool reese
- atmospheric pads with fun chords

bad:
- hat and kick are too soft
- goes nowhere

:/

fived though

Nav responds:

Haha, there are no chords. I just sampled a bunch of pads, then timestretched them.

Yeah, I canceled this song anyways, so I wasn't expecting people to care. Thanks for the review! :)

[Nav - Ecstasy]

Now...

all you need is a high pitched Japanese woman singing really fast... then take the recording and bump the pitch up three octaves.

Nav responds:

lol

[-Air and Rain-]

summary

Some of the piano chords worked, some didn't. You worked your melody around chords though, not the other way around - good job there.

Ok, uh... this started to feel like chillout trance once your drums came in. Nice lightning effect, I guess? But after that there's no ambiance or anything, it's just trance. I note that's what you're trying to do here, but what I would suggest to avoid something potentially bad is to lowpass or highpass your drums - or to use reverb and turn the dry output down, increasing the wet output.

4/5

Gloudas responds:

hmm thats a good idea, although I kinda intended the drums to have a trance feel, as I was attempting to change the song from ambience to trance. Not sure how well it worked though.
Anyways, thanks for the review!

[Temple of the Seductress]

Ehh...

Wouldn't hear brass in the jungle. I heard lots of wood and tom sounds so that was fun stuff...

I like the general idea of this but it doesn't go anywhere... you should probably spend about 20x more time on your music than you said you did, and then it'll really be unique and more awesome!

Returning the favor,
endlessnumber

dontxthemusic responds:

Alright, go back and read my new commentary if you wish to know the reason it is scored the way it is. Thanks for the review

<3&peace
dontxthemusic

[Benny House 2008 -First Mix-]

It's alright...

Do you know how to use the slide tool?
The thing that makes Benny's music so filthy and so good?

In the piano roll, in the upper left.

This sounds a bit like Change Style.

DaftPunkAAO responds:

Thanks! I'll take a look for that tool ;P

[p4c-Revenge]

phew

Hm, the bass definitely doesn't fit the mood. The strings would have fit if you had written for broader chords (maybe some higher up notes thrown in there) - cause then it's like Bob Sinclar or something, string samples.

I loved the rhythm - except for the claps, which felt awkward. Possibly a lowpass.

4/5

p4c responds:

got it master :) im probably not gonna come back to this [at least, for a while] so ill think of this stuff later.

[DJ-Kat - Virtual Theatre]

Failure.

This tries to be acid, but doesn't get anywhere close. Throwing down random notes and using 303-esque sounds doesn't make it automatically good nor creative. And, watch out for the clipping next time, it was hurting my ears.

The one thing I liked was the clean, solid kick, but I highly doubt you made it yourself. In any case, please feel free to respond with whatever you'd like; you used a preset FL snare, after all.

2/5

omgitskatman responds:

Fuck you, you peace of shit. I am nearly a fucking amature pro. Fuck no i didnt use a fl present snare and yes i made the kick you fag. I used a Parametric Equalizer and a compressor. And for the CLAP....(not a snare) i added reverb and a Parametric Equalizer to. And changed the pitch. Also chop notes. so ha! And you dipshit, i programed the frequency to make the 30 ish sound, sound like that. So you tell me who isnt creative. And also, no there not ramdom sounds, you have to pay close attention you fuck. So i have skill. Good day.

-DJ-KatMan-

[Civilized Society (EQ)]

5.00 / 5.00 (- 0.0000030)

I like this alot, except for your clap. Your production techniques are spot on. Only real criticism I have to offer is the overuse of snare rolls/cymbal... otherwise keep up the good work.

Hit me up! Maybe we can work together or something... I like your style.

Equation responds:

thanks, i think i did over use the snare a bit... I liked the build up in this song tho... I wasn't too sure about the clap, with me hearing this song over and over again i got amune to it lol... thanks for the review :)

[Planetary Demise--_--]

Hm...

Bad news:
~ kick is a tiny bit too trebly... just take off the really high frequencies
~ bass needs lowpass, just because the brooding feeling is not achieved, but not trying to generalize
~ what's up with your clap, how did you make that song

Good news:
~ fun progression, was enjoyable to listen to
~ nice break/buildup
~ nice bass switch at around 3:00
~ great ending.

PERVOK responds:

Fuck this is an old song.

[Milk{Live On}]

Nice cadences.

Haven't felt this emotional in a while. I like the use of piano, and in all seriousness this track is quite good.

However, your saw leads and stuff all mix together and it just sounds like a mess near the end.

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Hmmm I guess I didn't tweak the sound enough. I was trying to keep the end loud like a burst of emotion. I wanted to keep them from being too messy by keeping the 2 added synthes on a different sides from one another. I didn't think it sounded too messy but it also might be the fact that I wear 11 dollar head phones bought at the local grocery store.

Thanks for the review.