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I liked the melody/harmony work...

But it could have been 2/3 as fast and then would have been emotionally powerful. I also think diverse percussion would have helped -- but don't listen to me, because I suck at audio.

Chicken or the egg... "Miracle" or "Paradise"

Wow, a nice and original progression for once without bells and not happy. :)

Everything is good except for the bells which just make it not-trance and the i-VI-III-VII progression. 8/10.

Great beat...

Not digging the "Handbag" melody though. The chords in the beginning introduce it well. (And in the interludes)

The vocals are well placed.

hey, are those presets?

Because they sure sound like it. And the progression sucks. 2/5

Sucks for the celli.

omg tacobell

But the bells are a bit ringy :/ (headache -> 4/5)

Trance with a beat! HAX

At the very core of trance is the kick drum. B0UNC3 doesn't get it, you do, and I appreciate that. However, it's distorting your string synth in the beginning a bit, making it sound pulsed and uneven. Whether this is intentional or not, I'm not sure, but it sounds like a mistake :)

The song also doesn't go anywhere, but again, really nice kick.
If you had two more minutes, I'm sure you would have done something with it.
Review back please?

DjEagle responds:

Thanks for your review. The synth was not intentional made like that, its just the way it is. The effects on it were reveerb and some flanger (therefore pulsating back and forth). But anyways thanks again for your review.

:/... hmm

It's original, and I like the concept - especially your drums, but the drums aren't loud enough and they sound too much like presets - use the mixer

It needs a chord progression... no offense (I know you put alot of work into it) but it sounds kinda like random notes.

Anyways, a solid 4. Please rate/review back.

Strange rhythm in the beginning

And it contributes to the whole.

I really like the heartbeat theme.

5/5

Please rate/review back.

Hmm

I like the piano, I don't like the kick (not enough resonance)

The bass lacks substance

I like the whole thing as an entire piece... once the lead comes in, it's great.

5/5, please rate/review back.

(I hope you put this up for constructive criticism, cause that's what I'm giving you.)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

thanks for the review. ill see if i can review one of your songs for ya.

Downloading

I'm adding this to my list of music that I listen to. Like, not from Newgrounds. You're hanging with Robert Miles and Cascada on my list.

5/5, you rock.

Rate/review back please.

Dylan Hsu @endlessnumber

Age 31, Male

Student/DJ/Thespi an

Connecticut

Joined on 9/15/04

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